21考研英语（一）小作文终极预测（上）

Last week, you asked students to write and give you feed back on your lectures. Therefore, I have outlined my thoughts below.

In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues with the use of simple drawings. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you could provide us with more handouts, for I often fail to take down all the important points as time is limited. I would also like to see more discussion work, as I find this method the most suitable way to clarify and deepen my understanding of the subject content.

I’d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in us students and I look forward to your next lecture.

                              Yours sincerely,

                                     Li Ming

上周您要求学生写信提出关于您课程的反馈意见。因此，我把自己的想法列明如下。

总的来说，我觉得您的课程信息量大并且有很强的启发性。事实上，我尤其喜欢您使用简单的图画来阐明复杂的问题。这让您的课程既有趣又令人印象深刻。然而，由于时间限制我经常无法记下所有的要点，所以我确实觉得您可以给我们提供更多的课堂讲义。我发现课堂讨论是明确和加深我对课程内容理解的最合适的方式，因此我期待有更多的课堂讨论。

                                您真诚的，

                                李明

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1.I am writing the letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards your major.

2.I hope you find these proposals useful.

3.I trust you will take my suggestions into account.

我相信您会考虑我的建议。

                                          您真诚的，

                                          李明

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